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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意。
The Dragon Boat Festival There are many traditional festivals in china,such as the dragon boat festival,the spring festival and so on.Then i will introduce some more details information to you. Firstly this festival is derived from a famous person, quyuan,who dropped into the miluo river.In order to memorized him many people do some delicious food to missed him.secondly driving boats is a very popular activity.many people can enjoy wonderful match with the sound of applause and drum.thirdly you can eat delicious food like zongzi. All in all,as a chinese,we need protect our traditional festivals,and spread our festivals so that make more people know.Let us create a more colorful and meaningful world.
