高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I used to live in a beautiful small town with green trees all around it．The river which is through the town is clean veru much that fish can be seen swimming in it. The streets are not wide for car running. In sides of streets, all houses seem older and simple. People work harldly all the years, but they still can not have goten food enough for eating . Now, modern building are in side of streets, factories and shopping mall are all over in there. Different size cars are running the streets. The enviroment is getting worse due to the industral developments fast. a lot of trees gone and disappeared fish groups means the pollution shoud be treated .