高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇，但请认真检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

I used to live in a beautiful small town with green trees all around it．The river which is through the town is clean veru much that fish can be seen swimming in it. The streets are not wide for car running. In sides of streets, all houses seem older and simple. People work harldly all the years, but they still can not have gotten food enough for eating . Now, modern building are in side of streets, factories and shopping mall are all over in there. All kind of size cars are running the streets. The environment is getting worse due to the industrial developments fast. a lot of trees gone and fish groups disappeared means the pollution shoud be treated.