2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用学术词汇，望继续努力；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

The past two decades has witnessed the racing of our economy with a rapid development of the technology. Many people take the improvement of life quality as granted due to these changes. However, this is far from the truth. More and more people are feeling not as happy as the previous generation. The reasons are complicated and propound. First and foremost, the competition today is much more fierce than ever before. The job market is so narrow that a lot of fresh graduates can not land a job. Everyone is rushing and hushing, and every chance must be grabbed for. Second, the unhealthy life style of indoors man and indoors woman has gained a lot of popularity nowadays. It's of human's nature to get close to nature. If one stays indoors for a long time, he or she will feel tedious and moody. Last but not least, environmental pollution has bothered many people. This year Shanghai has been assailed by the pollution haze. Everyone has to wear mouse-muffle outdoors and outdoor exercises can not be carried out. As far as I'm concerned, measures should be taken to tackle these problems. First, colleges should equip students the skills for them to find a job rather than cramming students with obscure theories that do not make any sense in real life. Thus, graduates can better suit the demands of the market. Second, sports should be encouraged and awareness of a healthy life style should be raised. Young people should go outdoors more often without being immersed in the visual world. Third, green technology must be developed to protect the environment. By strengthening our connection to the nature and learning to self-relief, the quality of our lives can be improved.