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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
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Notice Frestmen: we are planing the tour of fall,if you are interested in it,please join us,what can we do for the tour ? According to the schedule,the touring willing include visiting the botanical garden and watching the exhibition of Nature and People in the morning.In the afternoon,we will visit the Summer Palace.If you want to join us,please take the notes: 1.you must go to the Student Union to enter name before Thursday. 2.we plan to have a picnic in the garden,so please bring the lunch by yourself. 3.we will assemble at 7:00 am,27th,Dec at the entrance of school and please be on time. 4.If you take lots of baggage,you can leave your baggage in the left. Student Union 10th,Dec
