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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

In our society, most of us have to deal with more and more things every day by ourselves. Whenever you face to one question, please think carefully before you act due to whatever the things are going no, you should responsible for your initial decisions. Who can consider one thing from all aspects in a few minutes? I think no one could do it. If you make a decision without every side, there must be many things unreasonable, and at the end an uncertain result would be trouble you. For example: Judges must announce the accurate judgments to people in every incident. The day before yesterday, there was a famous accident that the judge made a mistake and one person had stayed in prison for 17 years. The reason was the court didn't collect all of evidences, although there had some things show he was not. So many years later, the man has loose his family and his 17 years, and the judge has been unemployment, why those bad things had happened? Snap judgment. So, in a word, whatever you do, please more thinking about, and avoid the potential risk.

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