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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇。
Small wonder,in judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above table,if we look hard enough,we can observe lucidly that there have been great changes in folks'diet between 1986 and 1990.According to the figures which is provided,we can find that grain,formerly the main food of most Chinese people,is now playing a less important role in citizens'diet.And the same goes for fruit and vegetables.On the other hand,the consumption of high-nutrition food such as milk and meat has increased rapidly. When seeing the not uncommon phenomenon,probably we have no better way to appreciate it than by studying the following influential factors.In the first place,inhabitants can afford to buy nutritious in that they are much wealthier than before.In the second place,people have realized the importance of a balance diet to their health because lack of certain amount of meat or milk,for instance,will result in poor health.In the third place,in the final analysis,owing to the economic reform,meat and milk,which were scarce in the past,are produced in large quantities. Although milk and meat are important to one's health,eating too much rich food may result in obesity and may other diseases.Therefore,people should not only eat a lot of milk and meat but also enough grain,fruit and vegetable for the sake of their health.Only in this way,have we no difficulty but can maintain our health.