2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅；作者词汇表达不够灵活，但有些单词拼错了。

Nowadays, man cannot live without computer to some extent. For one thing, with computer man work more efficiently. For another thing, man can know many useful information online. Since computer is more and more popular, almost each family hold a computer. Computer is benefitial a lot to man, people can search news, information online and so on. They also can learn many new thing online. computer offer people convientence. While everything has two sides, so does computer. computer is harmful to people if people play so much time on it. All in all, computer is a doule-sword, we should use it suitable.