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字数:300 满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。
Respected teachers and students, I am very happy to stand here to extend my warm welcome to you all, especially the newer teachers and students. At the begining of the new term, I hope all of you can make a well preparation to face the challenges of new term and live a colorful and meaningful life. At first, we also should emphsis our school philosophical ideas, which will be continuously observed and put into practice. Before that, we should learn about each other and then increase our mutural understanding and friendship by communicating with each other, so that we should pay more attention to develope the liberty of knowledge. It depends on the efforts of the factulty and students. At last, let us make a joint efforts for the noble cause of the development of education.