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At present, many parents do everything for their children. Such as,the study of children, the work, and even the marriage is arranged by their parents.This has become a common social phenomenon in a thought-provoking. Nowadays in China,a lot of families have only one child.So the children may be usually doted upon by all family members.Gradually some of the children get used to depending on their parents or other family members.As when the children in the school failed in the exam, or in the society difficult to search work,especially, for the family conditions of children.they know they could depend upon their parents to deal with all the difficulty situations. Therefore, these habits too dependent on family children are difficult to gain a foothold in the competitive society. Because of their parents in excessive protection and love, they will gradually lose the ability to live independently. In the study, they feel the parents to arrange a good school, so there is no need to study hard; to work, they think that the arrangements for parents, not hard also can have a good job; or in love, parents arrange a marriage with more money interest relations, but without the basis of feeling. After this the spoiled children grow up, may not know how to Thanksgiving, they also do not know how to pay for others, these children will hinder social development after they grow up. Aa far as I am concerned,in order to let the children to be independent, parents should let the children do it themself to do their own thing, should let the children try their own best efforts to determine their own reading and working direction, even their marriage, parents also should not make too much interference in the child's feelings, parents should teach children learn to do things on themselves decide. Only in this way, when the children encounter setbacks,will they know how to face in brave, and to pursue their own sunshine, rather than hiding in their parents arms into the sun.Only in this way will children have not regrets in their life.
