拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution? Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, such as engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. some people extremely agree on it,But others don’t think so.In my opinion,private car owners should be taxed for pollution. On the one hand,as we all know,the air pollution has become the biggest problem in china.While with the growth of cars,the environment is becoming worse and worse,so this strategy is good to protect our environment.On the other hand,some people face a fact that heavy traffic.No matter on the working days or on the weekend days,heavy traffic has become a headache problem.So only in this way,can release this phenomenon. In conclusion,private car owners should be taxed for pollution,which an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city.
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