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文中学术词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
At present, many parents do everything for their children. Such as,the study of children, the work, and even the marriage is arranged by their parents.This has become a common social phenomenon in a thought-provoking. Nowadays in China,a lot of families have only one child.So the children may usually dote upon by all family members.Gradually some of the children get used to depending on their parents or other family members.As when the children in the school failed in the exam, or in the society difficult to search work.Especially for the children who come from the very advantageous family background .They know they could depend upon their parents to deal with all the difficulties. Therefore,those who are too dependent on their parents is very difficult to gain a foothold in the competitive society. Because of their parents in excessive protection and love, they will gradually lose the ability to live independently. In the study, they feel the parents arrange a good school for them, so there is no need to study hard; to work, they think that the arrangements for parents, not hard also can have a good job; or in love, parents arrange a marriage with the monetary relationship, but without the basis of feeling. Growing up in spoiling,children may not know how to thanksgiving,and they also don't know how to pay for others.These children will hinder social development after they grow up. Aa far as I am concerned,in order to let the children be independent, parents should let the children do it themselves to do their own thing and let the children try their own best efforts to determine their own choice on reading and working direction, even their marriage. Parents should also not make too much interference in the child's feelings, but they should teach children to learn to do things on themselves decide. Only in this way, when the children encounter setbacks,will they know how to face in brave and enjoy their own sunshine, rather than hiding in their parents arms into the sun.Parents must cultivate the ability of children independent.Only in this way will children have no regrets for life.
