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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
评语:

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;文中从句使用不丰富,要注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,with the development of electrical network and high-technology,internet is more popular in our diary life. On one side,internet bring us great convenience and strengthen the communication between people.We can do the shopping,reading,playing games or even working just with the help of internet.What's more,we can communicate with our friends through qq, msn, skype or other chatting tools to share interesting things or ask for relative help. However,every coin has two sides,some people trust internet blindly and relay on it so much which largely cause trust crisis and network crime. Some children even be addicted to international games and abandon their studies. In summary,we should take right attitude towards internet based on its two sides impacts.

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