一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

Hello, I am a student, my name's YuanJieyu. What a busy day I have！Today is sunday, I help my mother do more housework such as sweet the floor, and then, I do my homework quickly, It is too easy for me, I also do some activities, I play pingpong with my friend Diver.Aftter I watch TV, It is much interesting. I really like today!