高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；多多加强句法知识；文中词汇表达丰富度要提升，可是单词拼写错误稍多；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Past :My hometown surronuded by tree ;the fish were play in the river ;valliger lived in poor house and narrow road ;perple work very hard but life was poor. Now :High-rise builings and vrious kinds store surronud in the street ; the size of the vehicle along the streets ;industry develop made the environment degredation and reduse trees ,fish less and less ;so , the point of development is control pollution .