高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；多多加强句法知识；作者词汇表达不够多样，要注意单词拼写的检查；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Past :My hometown surrounded by tree ;the fish were play in the river ;villager lived in poor house and narrow road ;people work very hard but life was poor. Now :High-rise builings and vrious kinds store surround in the street ; the size of the vehicle along the streets ;industry develop made the environment degradation and reduce trees ,fish less and less ;so , the point of development is control pollution .