高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Past:My hometown was surrounded by tree ;the fish were play in the river ;villager lived in poor house and narrow road ;people work very hard but life was poor. Now:High-rise buildings and various kinds store surround in the street ; the size of the vehicle along the streets ;industry develop made the environment degradation and reduce trees ,fish less and less ;so , the point of development is control pollution .