高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown was a beautiful village in the past, the tree was surrounded in the street;the fish were play in the river;villager lived in poor house and narrow road;people work very hard but life was poor. Now:you can see High-rise buildings and various kinds store everywhere ; the size of the car was driveing by people in the streets;industrail developments while environment degradation and trees was cut down year by year,fish less and less;so, the point of development is control pollution.