高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown was a beautiful village in the past, the tree was surrounded in the street,the fish were play in the river.villager lived in poor house and narrow road,people work very hard but life was poor. you can see High-rise buildings and various kinds store everywhere,the size of the car was driving by people in the streets.industrail developments while environment degradation and trees was cut down year by year,fish less and less,so, the point of development is control pollution.