2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂，需要多使用一些学术词汇；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

Nowadays, man cannot live without computer to some extent. For one thing, with computer man work more efficiently. For another, man can know many useful information online. Since computer is more and more popular, almost each family hold a computer. Computer is benefitial a lot to a man, people can search news, information online and so on. They also can learn many new thing online. computer offer people convenience. While everything has two sides, so does computer. computer is harmful to people if people play so much time on it. All in all, computer is a doule-sword, we should use it appropriate.