高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown was a beautiful village in the past.The tree was surrounded in the street and the fish were play in the river.Villager lived in poor house and narrow road,people work very hard but life was poor. Now you can see High-rise buildings and various kinds store everywhere.The man driving the size of the car in the streets.Industrail developments while environment degradation and trees was cut down year by year,fish less and less,so, the point of development is control pollution.