高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown was a beautiful village in the past.For example,the tree was surrounded in the street and the fish were play in the river.Villager lived in poor house and narrow road,people work very hard but life was poor.Ten years later,you can see High-rise buildings and various kinds store everywhere.The man driving the size of the car in the streets.Society development make our life more and more covenience,but industry expansion polluted our environment.Trees was cut down year by year,furthermore,fish is disappear.So, the first thing is solve environmental problems.