高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

Now,environment problen all over the ward. My hometown was a beautiful village in the past.For example,the tree was surrounded in the street and the fish were play in the river.Villager lived in poor house and narrow road,people work very hard but life was poor. Ten years later,you can see High-rise buildings and various kinds store everywhere.The man driving the size of the car in the streets.Society development make our life more and more convenience,but industry expansion polluted our environment.Trees were cut down year by year.Furthermore,fish is disappeared. At the end of my word,in order to protect our servival environment,the first thing is solveing environmental problems.