2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些学术词汇；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

Nowadays, man cannot live without computer to some extent. For one thing, with computer man work more efficiently. For another, man can know many useful information online. Since computer is more and more popular, almost each family hold a computer. Computer is beneficial a lot to a man, people can search news, information online and so on. They also can learn many new thing online. computer offer people convenience. While everything has two sides, so does computer. computer is harmful to people if people play so much time on it. All in all, computer is a doule-sword, we should use it appropriate.