高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

My hometown was a beautiful village in the past.For example,the tree was surrounded in the street and the fish were play in the river.Villager lived in poor house and narrow road,people work very hard but life was poor. Ten years later,you can see High-rise buildings and various kinds store everywhere.The man driving the size of the car in the streets.Society development make our life more and more convenience,but industry expansion polluted our environment.Trees were cut down year by year.Furthermore,fish is evaporate. At the end of my word,in order to protect our survival environment,the first thing is solving environmental problems.