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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3373
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细。

用户练习作文:

When the hot word of the year--"honesty" gains many concerns from the public, should we still stand there hesiating for what occurs? Honesty is a virtue of Chinese traditional convention.When we youny we were told don't to tell lies.If we told a lie,there were a punishiment from parents.We should be sincere to everyone ,consequencely,we'll gain the trust from others.We'll be a reliable person and have a good reputetion.You definitely know Washinton,who cut down his father's cherry tree,was brave to commit his fault.It's a story to show us that everyone will make mistakes,however, the spirit of honesty is the most important virtue in our life. Telling lies is easy,but you need more lies to back the first lie up.If you start,you hardly to stop.Fortunately.the smallest spark of hope is enough to change.It's never too late to make a habit of honesty.If you hold the faith,you will be success and admired by others.

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