小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.She's name is SunYanli. she have a long fair ,and the clour is black.and she have two black eyes,she have a red mouth.she's voice is better,and she likes singing,compuetr game and by bike.she often eat lunch in my home.we can play basketball in the Sunday morning.