一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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I had a busy day today. I helped my mother did some housework in the morning. After that, I finished my homework before noon. In the afternoon, I played table tennis from 2:00 to 4:00. After that, I watched TV for a while. I like cartoons very much, especially the Disney animations. How enriched the day!