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Dec. 21th, 2013 Saturday fine This morning I got up early. After breakfast, I helped Mom with housework. Then I did my homework. The homework was very interesting, so I did it well. In the afternoon, I played table tennis with my friend Ling, we enjoyed ourselves very much. In the evening, I watched TV with my parents and then prepared myself for the next day's lesson. What a busy day today!