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We are senior school students now. As members of the school
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
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Good morning, everyone! We are senior school students now. As members of the school we should love our school and follow the school rules. We should have to study hard and do well in all subjects. We should love our teachers and be good at others. We also need to help and learn from each other. Of course to exercise and keep healthy is very important for us all. And I think it’s our duty to keep our school clean and tidy. If everyone do something useful to the school, it will be more beautiful. And I am sure I will enjoy our school life. Our school will get more and more good and beautiful. That's all. Thanks for your listening.
