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In recent years, more and more students go abroad for further study after graduating from junior middle school. In our school we did a survey on whether students should go abroad at that early age.I against to go abroad to study at the age,because these students in junior middle school haven't know which want in future,and they also have not enough ability to dule eveything without parents.We don't know what would happen in aborad.Maybe someone make great progress in English,or someone change in badly.All of them still feeling about lonely in abroad,and the emotion would beat them.So I think all of students keep studying stay at China better than go abroad.
