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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
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作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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What should I do if I had some land? I believe growing organic vegetable and fruits and other food is, definitely, my first choice. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, Growing plants are helpful to preserve environment. Some people may claim that he or she wants to build a lot house or a factory using land since they cost tremendous money. But things such as houses and factories are not our urgent need. By contrast, clean air, ice-like cloud and clear water actually our dream. Others may question that is it useful to protect environment by you small land? My answer is that no matter how small the land and no matter how weak your strength, as long as everyone act, we will make a difference. Further, growing crops will provide me health food. As we all know, many farms have been adopting excessive pesticide, fertilizer, even starts to plant genetically modified crops to enhance the yields, thus making high profits. Even though professionals states that all ingredients of food on the market meet the criteria and there is no evidences that suggest genetically modified have adverse effect on human health, Future? Who knows? After all, some ingredients need to accumulate certain amounts to work. Therefore, why not depend on yourself to supply the satisfied food rather than worrying about this problem? Finally, the poor can be benefited from my food. Although the development of society has reached remarkable progress, there are still a lot people who are suffering starvation. According to a recent survey conducted by United Nations, about 10000 children died as a result of poor nutrition. For those, living in starvation, food is more important than any other things as only keeping alive, can they strive for education, fame and wealth. Thus, the importance of food is not overstated. In conclusion, no matter how attractive the other options are, utilizing the land to grow crops is always my priority.

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