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Save the rainforest As we all know, rainforest plays an important role in the whole environment. It provides oxygen for human beings and homes for wild animals. However, in recent years, large areas of rainforest are disappearing day by day. As a result, more and more wild animals are endangered or even dying out. As a middle school student, I am really concerned about the situation. The government should make laws to protect rainforest as soon as possible. And we students should take action too, for example, we can help to call people’s attention to the importance of the rainforest in environmental protection.
