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How to deal the relationships betweed human and environment Today the environment around us is badly.The fog,the water and plants and animals were begining vanish. some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. I think we have ability to save our environment,because we have a heart,we dreamed the blue sky and clear water,we all hope we have a suitable life