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2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:40浏览次数:9751
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Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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文章上下文衔接自然;多多加强句法知识;作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;连词使用偏少。

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How to deal the relationships betweed human and environment Today the environment around us is badly.The fog,the water and plants and animals were begining vanish. some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. I think we have ability to save our environment,because we have a heart,we dreamed the blue sky and clear water,we all hope we have a suitable life

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