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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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作者词汇基本功很好,一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活,不过要注意词汇拼写的检查;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;句式变化多样。

用户练习作文:

Some people claims that there is never a reason to be rude to another person since we often regret after yelling to or being angried with other person. But in fact, whether we shoud be rude to others depend on cases. Admittedly, we all have ever experienced regretting after taking some impolite manners to communicate with people. Actually, most of the unreasonable actions stem from the misunderstanding or we think obstinately that it's others' fault rather than our fault; Thus, we inevitablely felt harmful when we calm down to consider things objectively. So the opinion that people should never to be rude to others is deserved to apraise. However, ignoring conditions and principles to please others should be condemned rather than encouraged. For example, representatives from India are attending Generally Assembly in New York, then a officer, who comes from a country that is unfriend to India, condems India authorities' corruption unwarrantedly, what should the Indian diplomat do? He or she will definitely adopts every means to refute the questioners. Since they represents Indian, thus cannot endure anyone to damage their country's fame. When it comes to country, I remember a notorious Facist county-Japan, which launched an cruel military action to invade China in 1937, then conquered NanJing city-the capital of temporal China later, where the facist soliders cruelly killed about 300 000 citizens, and there are a large number of women, even including the old and the young, are raped by them. Even today, the Janpanese government has never admitted the criminal, let alone apologize to Chinese. For these, how can you assume that we should never be rude to another person? Therefore, there is nothing wrong to polite to others. But when it comes to deterioate country's dignity or denying the criminals they have done, we shouldn't hestitate to take actions to response them,

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