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In recent years, more and more students go abroad for further study after graduating from junior middle school. In our school we did a survey on whether students should go abroad at that early age.I against to go abroad to study at the age,because these students in junior middle school haven't know which want in future,and they also have no enough ability to dule eveything without parents.We don't know what would happen in abroad.Maybe someone makes great progress in English,but someone would change badly.All of them still feeling about lonely abroad ,and the emotion would beat them.So I think all of the students study continue to stay at China better than go abroad.