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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似，简历一般包括个人情况，教育背景，个人能力，目标职业等信息。在写简历时，一定要实事求是，不可夸大其词，要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外，还要注意简历的格式和语言，格式要整齐明了，语言要简洁有力。
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Mr\Mrs: My name is LiMing.I was a boy and I was born on 15th,June,1986.I have graduated from department of English in North college and I haven't wife now.During the college I studyed hard so My lessons were good,especially my English.I have a strong ability of English speaking and writing and listening . And my second language is German and I also have the basic ability of German speaking.Otherwise,I grasp the process of foreign trade. I not only study hard in the college but aslo have lots of hobbies.For example I like playing basketball and singing and see films. Now I want to be a foreign trade cleck.If the company can give me the chance,I will do my best to do it.
