初中英语命题作文真题演练(16):阳光体育运动

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视。

The Christmas day is coming, I wish my teacher and friends merry christmas. I have practiced 228 sentences which my teacher ever sent to me before. I practiced it with my fellows who from the RT members in my teacher's yy room where we stay during study and about share these days.we enjoy to help each other for improving our poor english. Since finished the course from the Rocky, i really miss the time which i studyed with my teacher before each day.so sometimes i'm feeling under the weather. I'm more lazy than before, I couldn't help it, so i am always reminding myself that you couldn't be lazy and you need to work hard. but this way also unuseful. However, i need try to change my mind, no perfect english that will be affecting the future for me that i think.