2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
The Christmas day is coming, I wish my teacher and friends merry Christmas. I have practiced 228 sentences which my teacher sent to me ever before. I practiced it with my fellows who from the RT members in my teacher's YY room where we stay during study and about share these days.we enjoy to help each other for improving our poor English. Since finished the course from the Rocky, i really miss the time which i studied with my teacher before each day.so sometimes i'm feeling under the weather. I'm more lazy than before, I couldn't help it, so i am always reminding myself that you couldn't be lazy and you need to work hard. but this way is also unuseful. However, i need try to change my mind, no perfect English that will be affecting the future for me that i think.