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初中英语命题作文真题演练(16):阳光体育运动

发布时间:2013-12-06 17:21浏览次数:428
要求:
随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展,“每天锻炼一小时,健康工作50年,幸福生活一辈子”的理念深入人心,校园里出现了可喜的变化:运动时间延长了,运动项目增加了,学生体质增强了,校园生活丰富了。请以Sports in Our School为题给校刊写一篇报道。
内容要点提示:
1.time for sports
2.kinds of sports
3.change of students' health and study
4.change of school life
要求:
1.100词左右,可以适当发挥

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息


Sports in Our School
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

The Christmas day is coming, I wish my teacher and friends merry Christmas. I have practiced 228 sentences which my teacher sent to me ever before. I practiced it with my fellows who from the RT members in my teacher's YY room where we stay during study and about share these days.we enjoy to help each other for improving our poor English. Since finished the course from the Rocky, i really miss the time which i studied with my teacher before each day.so sometimes i'm feeling under the weather. I'm more lazy than before, I couldn't help it, so i am always reminding myself that you couldn't be lazy and you need to work hard. but this way is also unuseful. However, i need try to change my mind, no perfect English that will be affecting the future for me that i think.

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