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There is no doubt that some of believe that cheating is commonplace nowsdays and accordingly we will need to improve our ability of judgement.For instance,businessmen cheat on profits;husbands cheat their wives;students cheat in the exams for high marks,etc.It is dramatically inevitable for everyone to keep in mind that honesty is the best quality. As a consequence,every one of us should be an honest man because being honest will be of great benefit not only for us and but also for everybody.When honest,you will win others' trust and friendship in return.I have ever heard such a sentence that you will need to make up more lies in order to cover up your first lie.What's more,being honest is also the source of happiness.Only when everyone is honest,can we build a more harmonious society.
