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As the science and techonology have been developing rapidly,the Internet has seemed to penetrate into almost everywhere in our life-daily life,education,interpersonal comunication,trade,even the international contact.Obviously,it promote our life to get more and more convenient. But on the contrary,there are some bad consequnces of it,just like the picture above,the little girl let her father watch her blog to kown her daily life at school instead of a face-to-face conmunication. On my opinion,The high-speed Internet has been making so great contribution to the society that we should make the full use of it to prompt our society develop much fastly.We can optimize the education system,do some bssal daily activities,study the science,and so on. But over-relying on the internet may led us go much further aginst our dream.Interpesonal communication is such a significent matter that we people can understand each other easily and clearly,and so do nations.The one ,have no the ability of
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