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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4563
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
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文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;文中一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活,但请注意单词拼写的检查。

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As the science and techonology have been developing rapidly,the Internet has seemed to penetrate into almost everywhere in our life-daily life,education,interpersonal comunication,trade,even the international contact.Obviously,it promote our life to get more and more convenient. But on the contrary,there are some bad consequnces of it,just like the picture above,the little girl let her father watch her blog to kown her daily life at school instead of a face-to-face conmunication. On my opinion,The high-speed Internet has been making so great contribution to the society that we should make the full use of it to prompt our society develop much fastly.We can optimize the education system,do some bssal daily activities,study the science,and so on. But over-relying on the internet may led us go much further aginst our dream.Interpesonal communication is such a significent matter that we people can understand each other easily and clearly,and so do nations.The one ,have no the ability of

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