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字数：300 满分：100分
从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查。
as our standards of life improves,more and more students believe that we should not live frugally like our parents.what we shoule do is enjoying ourself ,spending our money doing what we want to do.As i see it ,we should spend moeny fugally,no matter how rich we are. For one reason, make a deep thingking before you spend money that is given by your parents who earn money laboriously just to let you live better life.For another reason,we shoule be a person who are careful with our money ,wo konw use it to do something useful ,rather than going shopping ,buying cosmetics,etc. in short,what i want to say is that we should save money,we do not need spend money on something unuseful,as a student we do not have to compare higher .
