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作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;丰富的使用了长难句;请注意分段。
Even though telling truth is increasing doubt by many, as Chinese traditional virtue, its importance cannot be overstated.For example, your colleagues and you are striving for a significant project,but facing a challenge and can't find a effective solution. Then, a colleague,who often lies to team member, suggest a method to deal with this problem.Actually he or she might be right, but do you believe him or her? It is the daily behavior-telling lies deteriorates the trust among team members, which in turn, will certainly impede the progress of project, thus bringing about adverse effect on company and individual welfare.