2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

如果增加些复杂句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

reduce waste on campus with the remarkable improvement of people 's living standard,wasting has become a negative phenonmenon in our society.and this issue has arousen wide public concern .the phonmenon of wasting in college is typically concerned by public.many college students waste a lot ,and the issue has become worse and worse. college students who waste may don't know the refugees which suffer from hunger when they borned.they may also don't know the resource in our Earth is reducing day by day.and the things they wasted become a lot of garbage which is hard to deal with.these rubbish may lead to great pollution to our environment. but what could we do to prevent them stop wasting? i think the solution is much simpler than appealing to stop wasting.just stop wasting by ourselves and enjoy a brighter future !