2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇，以及部分学术词汇，单词拼写也要仔细。

From the charge , we can conclude that comparing with the number of accidents in 2004,the number increased rapidly in 2005. It is nearly 2000 accidents in this city,in another word, there is about 6 accidents per day which is above 10 percent higher than last year. There are many reasons which induce the increase of number. On one hand, with the pepole's life level increasing, private vehicles become more and more popular, as a result traffic is very busy in city especially in big city. On the other hand, some drivers who is not expert in driving don't have ability in soving emergency. The more awful thing is that there are some drivers abide traffic rude, for example failing to give a singal,driving under the influence of alcohol,traveling too close to other vehicles and so on. some pederstrians crossing roads carelessly is also one of the reason for accidents. By number of private vehicles increases, the problem of traffic safe should induce more attention.The punishment of breaking the traffic rule should be more serious than before,which will induce pepole's attention.On the other hands, the conditions of road should be improved.