2004年考研英语作文真题:终点又是起点

文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

After a long running,the boy,with a brilliant smile in the depiction given above,reaches the terminal point and the new start point as well.Just like the title tells,“Ending is another beginning.” Our life is composed by many series of different parts rather than a simple running competition.The ending often meanings we have complished a partial mission and a new challenge is waiting.We should keep a passionary and positive mind to face the ending and beginning.Therefore,life has endless chances.With the experience of last stage,we’ll do better in next. There is a case come into my mind.As we all known,Sun Yang is the first Chinese to take the first place in swimming in the Olympic.His success is owing to his persistent endeavor.There is still a higher goal in his mind,so he succeed.Another rational example in hand is myself.After college graduating,I keep pursuing a higher aim.which is to be a postgraduate. In sum,don’t be contented with now,the magnificent future is worth pursuit.What we should do is just keeping moving.