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文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。
After a long running,the boy,with a brilliant smile in the depiction given above,reaches the terminal point and the new start point as well.Just like the title tells,“Ending is another beginning.” Our life is composed by many series of different parts rather than a simple running race.The ending often means that we have accomplished a period mission and a new challenge is waiting for us.We should face the ending and beginning with a passionary and positive mind.Therefore,life has endless chances.With the experience of last stage,we’ll do better in next. There is a case come into my mind.As we all know,Sun Yang is the first Chinese to get a gold medal for swimming in the Olympic Games.His success is owing to his persistent effort.There is still a higher goal in his mind,so he became the World Champion.Another example at hand is myself.After college graduating,I keep pursuing a higher aim,which is to be a postgraduate. In sum,don’t be contented with now,the magnificent future is worth pursuit.What we should do is just keeping moving.