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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people .in fact ,both have the right on side .i think people could quiet and kind in a rural area ,there have some animals ,for example ,the duck ,the chicken,and the goose etc .....i like quiet of small town or village .purify heart and soul ,everyday ,i want to feed some animals ,water some flowers ,then have a breakfast ,in the evening ,i'll take a walk in the evening with my family ,and i wanna read book at weekend ,this is my dream .but some people like live in city ,there have advanced things to make their life more interesting .they would go to the movie and surfering in holiday .more and more people choose live in city ,i don't know i will choose which way in the feature ,but whatever ,i must make an effort .

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