2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；文中衔接词丰富；能够使用一些简单的从句。

According to the table,we can conclude that life expectancy have increased stably from 1960 to 1990 as the infant mortality have a dramatically drop.The life expectancy have a increase by twenty years while the infant mortality have decreased year by year.What the author illustrates have reflect a hot topic which caused our attention. There are many points could explain what makes the change of the table above.But always two or three causes contribute directly to the change.First of all,with the development of economic people`s life quality have a great improve and the medic standard improved rapidly which makes illness could cured in time and the infant could be taken cared better. As to me,of the reasons we have analysis,to make the public realize the healthy life style is the most importance,for,consciousness is the precondition of action.Only after being conscious,can we go far away in the life road.