小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,she was my classmate in the university,she has a little fat,but very confident. I liked talk about to her,now she lives another city,we all have own life for ourselves, we haven't see each other for a long time，I miss her very much,and I cherish the memory of the university time with her. I think I will take my baby to pay a visit to her in a year, and take some gifts for her baby. I hope we could be friends forever.